>Mistake Number 5

> Bickham is getting serious with this one. What he calls “warming up the engines” I have also called “throat clearing.” I believe it is a useful tool in doing a first draft of a story—spelling out the background or the setting or the other static, backward looking details that ground the story—but that probably is not where the finished story is going to begin. The author clears his or her throat for a couple of pages, then gets to the real action of the story, or the “threat” or the “moment of change” as Bickham helpfully suggests:

“It is at this moment of crucial change, whatever it may be, that your story starts. Identify the moment of change, and you know when your story must open. To begin in any other way is to invite disaster.”

#5 Dont Warm Up Your Engines

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I am the author of three novels--THE LAST BIRD OF PARADISE, OLIVER'S TRAVELS, and THE SHAMAN OF TURTLE VALLEY--and three story collections--IN AN UNCHARTED COUNTRY, HOUSE OF THE ANCIENTS AND OTHER STORIES, and WHAT THE ZHANG BOYS KNOW, winner of the Library of Virginia Literary Award for Fiction. I am also the co-founder and former editor of Prime Number Magazine and the editor of the award-winning anthology series EVERYWHERE STORIES: SHORT FICTION FROM A SMALL PLANET.

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